NiFtY Interview with Jo Hart

Meet Jo Hart, a not-famous-yet author of picture books and a young adult fantasy work-in-progress. I met her through literary agent Mary Kole’s blog, and you can meet her here on mine.

Jo writes, teaches, moms, and lives in Australia. At the moment, we’re doing chapter-by-chapter critiques of each other’s manuscripts. The two of us have had great fun discovering grammatical, dialectical, and other linguistic differences between our uses of the English language. For instance, while I thought “mini-beasts” was a creative way to refer to toddlers, it is actually a widely-accepted term for bugs and insects in Australia.

And here…she…is!

BH: Tell me a little about your work-in-progress, The Wizard of the Middle Realm.
JH: It’s a YA fantasy novel about a 15-year-old girl named Katie. She loves to get lost in novels about wizards and magical creatures until she is thrust into the Middle Realm, a world not much different to the worlds in her books. Now all she wants to do is find a way home. Unfortunately the Middle Realm is a dangerous place and finding the one person who holds the key to her getting home will not be easy.

BH: When did you realize that you were a writer?
JH: Probably the day I learned to write, maybe even before then. I remember making a story book in kindergarten (which is what we call the year before starting school here), I had to get the teacher to write the words of course because I didn’t know how to write yet. Honestly I have always wanted to be a writer; I’ve always loved making up stories and creating characters.

BH: Where do you get most of your ideas and inspiration?
JH: Anywhere and everywhere. I get ideas from dreams, from sitting outside and observing the world around me, from an article in the paper, even books and movies can spark an idea. Take my current WIP: the world itself first came to me when I was walking around the farm with my dog, I would look at the cluster of trees and imagine a forest; the twins were inspired by two girls I went to school with; some of the other characters just spoke to me out of nowhere. I’ve always had an overactive imagination.

BH: Do you have a set writing schedule, or are you more of a “when the mood hits” kind of girl?
JH: I find it hard to schedule or write when the mood hits because I have two young children to work around. I usually take any opportunity I can when I have five minutes to myself (even if it means sometimes choosing writing over doing the dishes).

BH: AMEN on the dishes.

Katie, the main character in The Wizard of the Middle Realm, is a bit timid and lacks in the muscles department, especially compared to a lot of other popular heroes. However, she’s incredibly smart and resourceful. Can you compare her to anyone you know in real life?
JH: Katie’s actually based on me a little bit, what I was like as a teenager anyway. I was always the shy little bookworm at school, although I was a lot more sporty than her. I thought to myself, there are so many heroes out there who are strong and confidant, but what if the hero was just an average teen, someone shy and weak. I think it gives her more room for development as a character; and all the bookworms reading can relate to her.

BH: What does your writing workspace look like?
JH: I write on my computer at my desk usually (although occasionally I use my laptop). The desk is generally untidy, covered in papers and odds and ends (mostly things my children pass to me like books and toys). The desk is in the lounge room so I can type and watch the kids at the same time, it used to be by the window overlooking the garden, but at the moment it’s been shoved into a little alcove in the corner while we’re getting ready to move house (which is where it is in the photo).

BH: Your picture book story, “Can You Jump Like a Kangaroo?” was shortlisted in the smories (original stories for kids) contest. Was this your first short story, or have you written others?
JH: I love writing short stories and children’s stories and have written many in the past. I have a couple of short stories posted on my blog actually.

BH: What is your experience like, balancing writing and motherhood?
JH: It can be hard to balance sometimes. I would love to be able to get lost in my story whenever the mood hits, but my kids are my priority so that doesn’t happen. My youngest naps in the middle of the day, so I usually take the opportunity to write then. My eldest has lunch and plays quietly in the room with me and I eat lunch at the computer while I write. Then if I’m not too tired after they go to bed I do some more writing then. I work as a substitute teacher too, so some days I don’t get any writing done at all.

BH: What is your favorite YA book of all time?
JH: John Marsden’s Tomorrow series (the first book is Tomorrow When the War Began and they’ve just made a movie from it). I first read the series as a teenager and loved them (as did every other teenager I knew back then, boys included). John Marsden has a great talent for writing YA, I used to read all his YA books as a teen and even once got to meet him! If you’ve never heard of him, check out his website. I highly recommend all his books.

And then there’s the Harry Potter series by J.K. Rowling, which I first read as an adult, and fell in love with right away. For me it’s a close competition between Marsden and Rowling.

BH: How about your favorite book on the writing craft?
JH: Kate Grenville’s The Writing Book. It was actually one of the prescribed texts for my Writing major at university, but unlike most other textbooks I had to buy and that ended up in a cupboard never to be read again, I keep Grenville’s book close by my computer as a valuable resource. There are some great writing prompts and activities in there that I even use in the classroom sometimes. It has great advice for all aspects of the writing process from character to dialogue to description. You can check it out here.

BH: Why do you want to be published?
JH: I think it would be amazing to walk into a bookstore and see a book I wrote sitting on a shelf with my name emblazoned across the jacket. It’s always been my biggest dream to be a published author, for my words and ideas to be immortalised in print and live on after I’m gone.

BH: Lately in the publishing blogosphere there’s been a lot of talk about how to craft a good setting for a novel. Because you’re writing a fantasy, I’m wondering what sort of challenges you’ve faced with the setting in your novel, and how you have worked through them.
JH: I suppose the biggest challenge would be conveying the image I see into my head onto the page so the reader can see the world the way I envision it. Of course every reader will interpret and see the world differently, but I want them to get a general sense of the world. Like in the woodland scene in the beginning I want to convey a place that feels lifeless. Usually when I’m describing a setting in my novel I close my eyes to get a clear picture in my head. As I write I think about not just what my characters can see, but how the bark feels on the trees, what smells are in the air, what sounds they can hear. It’s more than just painting a picture with words; creating a setting is about getting the reader to experience it as though they were standing right there alongside your characters.

BH: One thing you do especially well in your writing is convey suspense through narration. Do you have any tips for other writers on how to do this well?
JH: Use the five senses. Get into the main character’s head and imagine yourself in the same situation, what sounds, sights, scents, etc. would make your heart beat faster? And use short sharp sentences, but make sure they vary in length so they don’t become monotonous.

BH: What is the best advice anyone has given you with regards to your writing?
JH: Show, don’t tell. It’s my writing mantra.

You can see a video of a very expressive girl reading Jo’s story “Can You Jump Like a Kangaroo?” here. And for more info and insights into Jo’s life and writing, you can visit her blog.

Thanks for the interview, Jo!

NiFtY Interview with Josh Fernandez

Kato Peruses an Author Contract (Oh if only my Clarkie could do the same!)

For my second-ever Not-Famous-Yet Author Interview, here is Josh Fernandez. He’s an amazing writer with a hilarious, irreverent voice, and he has a book of poetry coming out this fall. It seems I’ve snagged him for this interview just before his jump into fame. Okay, so publication does not equal instant fame. For instance, I, like many other people, still have no idea who wrote that weird Twilight book.

BH: What’s your one-paragraph pitch for Stickup Kid?
JF: Buy it or I’ll murder you! No, it’s an exciting little story about a small half-Mexican, half-Caucasian kid named Bear who lives with his mom in Brookline, a very Jewish suburb of Boston. One day Bear separates from his class while they’re on a field trip and he meets a man named Stoop. Bear runs away from home and finds Stoop, who takes him in and teaches the naïve boy about his Latin heritage, but he also teaches him the art of being a stickup kid—a purse-snatcher, a robber, a thief …

BH: You’re one of the few people I know who actually makes a living from his writing. What do you write to pay the bills?
JF: I write mostly arts and culture stories. I write for Spin.com, Sacramento News & Review, Boulder Weekly and some other papers that are scattered throughout our glorious country.

BH: How do you think your nonfiction writing influences your fiction, if at all?
JF: Non-fiction writing has helped me write fiction in a number of ways. It’s really helped me find a voice. My goal when writing for newspapers isn’t to be a solid journalist; my goal is to simply entertain the reader. I get a lot of hate mail. News writing has also helped me find the focus of whatever I’m writing. Nobody wants to read a long, blathering story, except for my grandpa. But he could barely read. And I think he was just pretending to read, trying to escape my grandma. RIP, gramps.

I also write poetry, which helps with everything except for money. Although, I just signed a contract with R.L. Crow press. They are going to publish my first full-length collection of poems, tentatively titled Dancing to Genocide. It should be out in the fall.

BH: What is your writing schedule like?
JF:  I’ve never really had one until I started writing Stickup Kid. I’d kind of just write when I felt like writing, which kind of ended up being all the time. But for the novel I got up every morning at 8, went to the coffee shop and wrote until 2 or 3. It was important that I did that because I have a tendency to stay in my underwear all day and watch YouTube videos of high school kids getting hit in the nuts with various objects.

BH: Voice is one of the aspects of Stickup Kid’s beginning that I admired the most. It’s also a quality all writers are after, and something which confuses many beginning writers. Do you have any tips to share on how to cultivate voice?
JF: I think basically you have to just have a voice. Sometimes I teach a writing class at Sacramento City College and I ask the students if they ever have thoughts that pass through their heads that they’d never tell anyone because they seem weird or sick. They always say “Yes.” Then I tell them to take those thoughts, write them down and then throw away everything else. And then they don’t say anything. Because they’re all asleep. Because I’m really boring. The point is, you just have to be unafraid to grab the core of who you are and put it down on a page. Nobody wants to read the outer part of you that’s been influenced by the outside world. That’s already been done. People need to read the inner you. That’s very new age. I learned that from Yanni.

BH: Your blog title “I Know, I Hate Blogs Too!” just begs me to ask what it is you hate about blogs. So, what do you hate about blogs?
JF: I don’t hate blogs. I just hate bloggers. Ha! I am a blogger, so what does that say? Really, it’s just the journalist in me that hates the idea of people who don’t get paid taking our jobs because they offer their blogging service for free. There’s so much bad journalism now because of this idea that “anyone can be a writer!” It’s the same with self-publishing. Anyone can say, “I’m a published author!” and then be a writer, while the rest of us who are actually trying to write stuff that people will read get left in the dust. Basically, I’m saying “Waaaaah!” But in more words.

BH: Since I started my own website/blog, I discovered roughly 167,738,744 other writer blogs and websites. Are you an island or do you frequent anyone else’s?
JF: Oh I read blogs all the time. I kind of just cruise around to see what other people are doing. I can’t really think of any off the top of my head, though.

BH: Can you compare Bear, the main character in Stickup Kid, to anyone you know in real life?
JF: I based a lot of Bear off my own life. And I took parts of friends from childhood and put them into his character. There are a lot of things that happened to me that also happened to Bear. All the good, heroic things were me. The horrible and twisted stuff was, um, my friends. Yeah.

BH: What does your writing workspace look like?

JF: Pictures! We have a spare bedroom that we made into an office. It’s good to have an office without a TV. I’d never get anything done with the possibility of Judge Judy lurking nearby.

BH: What is your favorite book on the craft of writing?
JF: I really like Robert Pinsky’s The Sounds of Poetry. It allows you look at words in an entirely new perspective. The first time I read the book it made me a little insane. I had no idea words were that delicate.

BH: Last we spoke about it, you were revising Stickup Kid with an agent’s guidance. Where are you in the process? Have you signed a contract with that agent?
JF: I’m editing it right now. When I’m done I’ll hand it over. They want the cleanest copy I can make. After that, if they like it, which hopefully they will, actually, I don’t know what happens after that.

BH: How did you & the agent originally connect?
JF: Luck! I set up my website and one of their interns happened to click on it. He read the part that mentioned I was writing a book and he told me to send the first 20 pages. So I did.

BH: What is the best writing advice anyone has given you?
JF: It was something about a bow. It was like: make your paragraph like a bow, tight enough so that when you pluck it it will resonate with the perfect pitch. Crap, no, that wasn’t it. I get a lot of great writing advice, but then I forget everything. My mind is small.

BH: Do you “tweet”?
JF: Yes. I was totally against it, but then I realized that it was another way to get my stories out there so I’m getting used to twitter.

BH: Why do you want to be published?
JF: That’s a great question. It’s all a blur now. I’ve been mulling the story of Stickup Kid in my mind for so long that I just wanted to get it out. I really like the story and I honestly think that other people will like it. I like to write stuff that I like to read. I kind of want to see if other people like the same stuff that I do.

Here's the feature image without Josh's forehead cut off. I spent at least an hour trying to fix the feature image. Sorry, Josh. Love the bunny.

BH: Any words on advice to other writers for keeping the hope alive?
JF: Writing isn’t a very hopeful profession. I think it’s a great hobby, but there’s a lot of heartache and rejection in the world of writing. I am the kind of person who expects to be rejected, so when I’m not I feel like I’ve tricked someone. It’s great. Not all people are like that, though. A lot of people expect to be published and expect people to gush over their writing. And when they don’t get published they blame everyone else. It can’t be like that. You have to pay a ton of dues, and when you’re done paying dues, you have to stand there while people dangle pink slips in front of your face that say “We’re sorry, Mr. Fernandez, but we regret to inform you that your story isn’t what we were looking for …”.  Man, that was like the least hopeful thing I’ve ever said. Sorry. I’ll just say: Keep the hope alive!

There you have it, folks! Words from very-nearly-famous author Josh Fernandez. When he’s famous he’s promised to get us all book deals with his amazing influence. Not really. I’m promising that for him.

Thanks again, Josh, for the interview!

You can check out Josh’s website by clicking here.

First NiFtY Author Interview: Seven N. Blue

For my very first NiFtY (Not Famous…Yet!) Author Interview, I give you Seven N. Blue. I met Seven through the Sacramento Writer’s Group and we clicked immediately. Not only are we both highly intelligent, creative writer mamas, but we have written our young adult fantasy manuscripts in tandem. Seven has incredibly fascinating ideas as well as the ability to construct convincing and endearing characters. Without further introduction, here…she…is!

BH: Where do you get most of your ideas and inspiration?

SB: From music, music videos, and artwork. Sometimes video games.  I don’t really play them, but there are some gorgeous video games out there (Still Life, Silent Hill) those are two of my favorite aesthetically speaking – I played Silent Hill just to watch the scenery. And music.  I love music of almost any era. I consider music a time machine and a doorway to the imaginary world I spend a lot of time at.

BH: Do you have a set writing schedule, or are you more of a “when the mood hits” kind of girl?

SB: Must have a writing schedule. I have a toddler!

BH: Can you compare Myla, the main character in The Innocents, to anyone you know in real life?

SB: There is a little of me in Myla, but then again, there is a little of me in almost every character I write. I had an interesting teen life. I did things that, well, most teens would not.  Like getting married at 16, for example.

BH: Wow, 16! I never knew that about you. Are you willing to share anything about that?

SB: Yeah, it lasted 11 months! I was divorced  living on my own by the time I was seventeen.

BH: Can you share any details about your current WIP (work in progress)?

SB: Oohhh! That is top secret! At least right now!

BH: (Well, without spilling anything to the audience, I will whisper: I know a little bit about it, and trust me, it’s gonna be great.)

What does your writing workspace look like?

SB: This is funny.  Right now I am sort of “in the hallway” of life.  In “between places”.  My Red Dell Laptop on a very cluttered desk (the desk is not mine, but the laptop is!).

BH: You’ve just finished a young adult (YA) novel, and your WIP is a YA novel. Any plans to write for other age groups?

SB: I don’t know.  It’s hard to say. I feel like I will always be seventeen inside. Maybe I can do early twenties, like in five years…when I emotionally grow up!

BH: What is your favorite YA novel of all time?

SB: I am going to have to say two authors here, because they both blew me away.  Definitely The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins. That book was amazing.  Not just the story line but how incredible Collins was at juxtaposing the feelings in her characters.  For example, the main character really liked her partner…a lot…he saved her life…but she had to kill him. I also love love love Holly Black and her bad girl protagonists.  Valiant is one of my favorite books ever because of her unforgettable characters like Sketchy Dave and Lollipop and a plot where injecting fairy dust can make mortals perform magic – think of the possibilities for story with that plot!

BH: When did you first realize you wanted to be a writer?

SB: When I was six and my father raved about a short story I wrote.  I won every writing contest in elementary and junior high (I still have the trophies! Well, they’re in storage now while I am in the “hallway” of life).

BH: Are you currently seeking an agent’s representation? What are you looking for in an agent?

SB: I am looking for agent representation.  I just want a good agent who will do what they say, and I hope we both can have a lot of fun, be productive, and achieve our dreams together.

BH: What is the best advice anyone has given you with regards to your writing?

SB: Grow a thick skin, believe in your dreams and keep on writing.  Don’t wait for inspiration, sit your butt in the chair and believe in the process of writing. It will develop, the ideas will come and they will amaze you.

BH: You’ve always struck me as a very positive, upbeat person when it comes to your writing. I think all aspiring novelists can use a bit of the positive in their lives–any tips on how to keep the hope alive, even when the query rejections try to smother it?

SB: This is funny, I am there right now.  I think I have received about thirty rejections so far, along with some great feedback from the ABNA reviewers (The Innocents made it to the top 5% Quarterfinals for 2010) to alleviate the pain.  I also have a partial out right now and I am waiting for feedback.  My advice would be to realize that it is a power greater than yourself who is writing through you, and you must keep going.  You will be tested to see how badly you want it, and you must persevere.  It is all part of the process – growing a thick skin through rejection letters is what prepares us for when we are published and half the folks love us while the other half hates us.  I think rejections are all part of the process of becoming a professional published writer.  We all have to go through it and we should welcome them with open arms because all they is that we are that much closer to our dream agent, and our book deal.

BH: What is your experience like, balancing writing and motherhood?

SB: Wow.  Yeah, not easy.  I have a writing schedule I abide by.  I write no matter what during the allotted time.  When I am supposed to be spending time with my son, then I spend time with him wholeheartedly and not worry about my writing because I know I have a schedule.  A schedule is the only way I can function!

There you have them: wise words from my pal and critique “pardner” Seven. She might not be famous…YET, but with her talent and dedication, it won’t be long. Special thanks to Seven for being my very first interviewee!

On Seven’s website you can read everything from book reviews, to advice on writing, to musings about family and motherhood. And today, as an added bonus, she has interviewed me as well!